Editing pictures

I've gotten a lot of comments on the black and white pictures from Bergen. Especially about the kids. As I have been trying to tell everybody: I am trying to learn this stuff, and I value your feedback. And I try to learn from them.

Some of you suggested to edit them before posting. So I thought I'ld give it a try. Remember, I am just learning this, and this is just an example of editing. I think I will stick to improving my shooting skills, and maybe look into editing later on (there are a lot of possibilities here too).